The charts below show information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve. Summaries the information by selecting and report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show information about the number of zebras and buffalos in the Nboro Nature Reserve and how oftentimes rainfall was raining between 2005 and 2011.
In 2005, there were fewer zebras than buffalos with forty zebras and fifty buffalos, and those rose to approximately seventy and eighty in 2007. However, between 2009 and 2011 the number of buffalos increased by more fewer than a hundred, and also the number of zebras decreased fewer than twenty animals in 2009, but the zebra population then increased again to reach about eighty-five in 2011.
During the same period, the amount of rainfall was random condition. In 2005 and 2009, this dropped to 700 millimeters, but in 2007 and 2011 the amount increased rainfall to reach about 1,200 millimeters.
Overall, the charts give information that both the number of animals and the amount of rainfall which were have grown up during 5-year period. However, the relationship is not an exact one because when zebras population rose, whilst buffalos and rainfall in 2009.
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...increased by more fewer than a hundred...
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the amount of rainfall was random condition
the amount of rainfall was in random condition
However, the relationship is not an exact one because when zebras population rose, whilst buffalos and rainfall in 2009.
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