You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
To the Editor,
I am a long standing member of our local community and I am writing a recommendation to other citizens for one of our fine neighbourhood dining establishments; The Lone Star Café.
There were many impressive attributes which struck me upon my entrance, such as the décor and ambience. I particularly enjoyed the laidback attitude of the place. But for my mind it was the service along with the size and quality of the portions that was most memorable.
The service was professional yet intimate, and along with the sheer quantity of the dishes served, motivated me...
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flaws:
No. of Words: 156 200
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 156 200
No. of Characters: 770 1000
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.534 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.936 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.048 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.245 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.389 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.687 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4