The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age
groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make
comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the rate of male and female Australians belonging to different age groups doing regular exercise in 2010. Overall, the most striking feature was the similarity in the judgment of both groups in 4 out of 6 factors in which women worked out more than men.
As can be seen from the bar chart, women whose ages ranging from 25 to 64 were more into physical activity than men. Specifically, the year 2010 experienced the fact that there were from 39.5% to 45.1% of men claiming to do regular physical activity, by contrast, the figure for women was more outweigh, at between 48.9% and 53.3% in the same range of age groups. Interestingly, the difference was more pronounced as for Australian people aging from 35 to 44, where there were 13% higher of women doing exercise than their man counterparts.
With regard to the youngsters belonging to the youngest age groups examined, 52.8% of boys did physical activity regularly in which compared to just 47.7% of girls admitted doing so. As far as the oldest age group is concerned, the elderly in Australia shown a tendency towards doing exercise presenting an approximately equal percentage at around 47% in both genders
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89756097561 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70348663326 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6126551102 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.428571429 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204498610344 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102374803364 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490483802793 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138359419043 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445713057789 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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