You have recently visited a tourist attraction and were very pleased by the help given to you by the staff. Write a letter to the staff manager and say
– Give details of your visit.
– Describe how the staff helped you.
– What do you want the manager to do?
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to show my gratitude for the service that I got from your workforce. Allow me to explain why I would like to tell you this.
Last week, I went to visit Cox’s Bazar sea beach which is situated beside your Grand Sultan resort. After reaching the resort, I and my family members took rest and in the afternoon, we went to the seashore and passed quality time there. At night, we got back to the hotel room and discover that we left our bag in the coast area. I, immediately, informed this to your staff and asked for help. Without any delay, he informed it to the tourist police and he, himself, went to the place to check the lost property. After couple of hours, he came back with the carrier without any kinds of missing.
Now, I want you to issue a letter of appreciation to the staff so that others can get motivation to dedicate themselves for the welfare of others.
I look forward to hearing from you soon,
R
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-02-19 | Urvashi ghai | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ultan resort. After reaching the resort, I and my family members took rest and in...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43016759777 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32572724315 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6173266838 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187232756807 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699098002278 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662766938634 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121573656321 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389247776338 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.