Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As per the technological advancement many people depend on online services for buying things like books, groceries air ticket and so on. However, there are two aspect that, in one view which, would likely to have a time consuming, While, the negative point is that, such online products would mostly implausibly, and might be cheating, difficult to explore our views to the online market.
On the one hand, people like elderly, and handicapped may not get a chance to go outside as others do. In such situations people could use credit card or visa card to purchase their needs by internet. Similarly, business person or working personal those who have hectic working schedule would might be helpful such services. So that they could subside their journey to the market or agency and thus, would help to consume their time and tide for searching and selecting in different shops or somewhere. Furthermore, Online purchasing would be inevitable in some critical situation like travelling services namely, booking air ticket, or train ticket for the immediate purpose or during season time. Such facilities would be feasible for everyone those who are using such alternatives for the needs, and which would be a positive outcome of internet market.
Nevertheless, there are many detrimental effect is often reported too in many regions, like online credit card hacking, misuse of accounts and so on. People would might use details of their visa or credit card services for the payment of online purchasing. Wide range of such services would might be the chance of getting hacked or misuse. In addition, some online market may not show their actual products, that is variety of extra power cameras illuminate the product in good to see or fascinating human eyes. So that we could not say that all products of online shops are trustworthy. Owing to the fact that, people would not get a chance to select appropriate good items by the full satisfaction, and up to the time of delivery the customer would wait with tension mind. For example, I had to purchase one grocery by internet shops, when at the time of delivery I could not wait to see the actual product and at last when I got it is not the same product which I requested online.
In conclusion, there are many advantage in online purchasing but the negative outcome is higher as compared to the positive result. If we would spend some time for our self we could avoid such consequences of internet services and would have had a positive result than the internet chicanery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'aspects'?
Suggestion: aspects
...icket and so on. However, there are two aspect that, in one view which, would likely t...
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'aspect' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'aspects'.
Suggestion: aspects
...icket and so on. However, there are two aspect that, in one view which, would likely t...
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Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... good to see or fascinating human eyes. So that we could not say that all products of o...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...ed online. In conclusion, there are many advantage in online purchasing but the negative o...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...sing but the negative outcome is higher as compared to the positive result. If we ...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sequences of internet services and would have had a positive result than the inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91608391608 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5784531666 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5417177153 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.058823529 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2352941176 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948134623724 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374484696548 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345094669296 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696643342331 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246910528901 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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