In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.
What are causes of this? What actions may be taken?
Growing number of cars leads to congested streets and roads, in particular, in megalopolises has indeed become a grave problem in recent decades. Below some factors that caused the situation in question will be discussed in detail and some possible solutions will be given.
To begin with, worsening situation with traffic in many urban areas is created by many factors but the most crucial one is probably inefficient usage of private vehicles. Those who adhere to this prospect have buttressed it by statistical date that has being collected in the USA, China and the EU. The researchers claims that 81% of all commuters travel alone and avoid taking passengers; moreover, private automobiles are not being used 88% of time. It need not say that that leads to overcrowded streets that are filled with moving and parked cars. Those are to main factors that contribute to the traffic problems.
However, sharing cars is a new policy that has been promoted and implemented by the USA and the European Union has had a positive impact on the traffic in some areas. The number car used has fallen thus the less automobiles are used, the less congested streets become. Consequently, if governments of other countries establish similar practices, the traffic problems might be alleviated significantly.
Finally, development of driveless vehicles may solve the issue completely. If a novice technology that have being developed by such mighty companies as Uber and Google become legal and widespread, dwellers of megacities may forget about jammed roads in the nearest future. Those who work in Uber on the project reported believe that those automatic cars would create a new revolution in transport and two major causes that have been discussed above will be resolved completely because the driveless autos need not be parked in residential areas as well as one car could be used by many individuals to travel. So, it seems that traffic jams have no future in the world of driveless cars.
To sum up, congested roads is an ubiquitous issue in many parts of the today’s world but the situation might be lessened by novel, efficient policies and probably completely solved by the impending technology of autonomous cars.
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Essay evaluation report
The researchers claims that
The researchers claim that
sharing cars is a new policy that has been promoted and implemented by the USA and the European Union has had a positive impact on the traffic in some areas.
sharing cars that has been promoted and implemented by the USA and the European Union has had a positive impact on the traffic in some areas. //if not, two verbs for one sentence, or:
sharing cars is a new policy that has been promoted and implemented by the USA and the European Union, and it has had a positive impact on the traffic in some areas.
The number car used has fallen thus the less automobiles are used, ...
The number car used has fallen, and thus the less automobiles are used, ...
If a novice technology that have being developed
If a novice technology that has being developed
Sentence: So, it seems that traffic jams have no future in the world of driveless cars.
Error: driveless Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
After 'However', need at least one transition sentence before we start the arguments. We may change this:
However, sharing cars is a new policy that has been promoted...
to this:
However, a lot of actions can be taken to ease the issues. first, sharing cars is a new policy that has been promoted...
change this:
Finally, development of driveless vehicles may solve the issue completely. ...
to this:
Second, development of driveless vehicles may solve the issue completely. ...
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2 //still need to pay attention to grammatical issues. leave 3-5 minutes double check.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 364 350
No. of Characters: 1815 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.368 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.986 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.685 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.267 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.716 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.574 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.034 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'claim'.
Suggestion: claim
... USA, China and the EU. The researchers claims that 81% of all commuters travel alone ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun automobiles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...The number car used has fallen thus the less automobiles are used, the less congeste...
^^^^
Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... cars. To sum up, congested roads is an ubiquitous issue in many parts of the t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, in fact, in particular, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13736263736 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75720176532 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546703296703 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5242836977 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166851853205 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540425227126 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350067746315 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893899163388 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266107366927 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.