The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts given compares the popularity of eight recreational activities in the US between 1999 and 2009.
It can be clearly seen that in both two years, the proportion of walking makes up most of the charts. In addition, there were significant changes in the figures of yoga, jogging and aerobics over the period.
From 1999 to 2009, the figures of soccer and camping slightly increased by 1%, from 17% and 8% to 18% and 9%. Meanwhile, yoga and swimming, which constitute only 5% and 9% in 1999, became increasingly more popular with doubles in the number of people who participated in these activities.
As it can be seen, during the ten-year period, walking, which constitutes 29% and 31%, was the most common activity among Americans. By contrast, the rates of jogging (7%), aerobics (13%) and bicycling (12%) which were considered to be relatively low in 1999, experienced dramatic falls by nearly half respectively during ten years
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0127388535 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77280101954 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675159235669 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0731015021 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122612037589 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590548946069 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527228903261 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841335105297 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557352554987 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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