Essay topics: A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say.
- Describe the work you wanted him to do.
- What is your complaint about his job?
- What do you expect him to do about it?
Dear Mr. Obama,
I am writing to inform you that I am not contented with the result of the work you did in my cottage.
I contacted you two weeks ago in order to repair a leaked roof in my home. We agreed that you do the job within three days for five hundred dollars. You signed the contract and took the money.
The problem is that the roof began to leak again. The water started to drop from the ceiling in the main room after the storm hit the town a day ago. I would like to underscore that in the signed agreement, you guarantee the quality of your work. In other words, my dripping roof is now your problem.
I expect that you will address the issue within a couple of days after you receive this e-mail. Needless to say that additional money will not be paid for the job or the materials. Moreover, the traces of the rain water on the ceiling and walls in the
main room should be erased completely as well. It would be appropriately that you contacted me be phone as soon as possible to negotiate all details.
Your client,
Mr Dubinchuk
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
It would be appropriately that you contacted me be phone as soon as possible to negotiate all details.
It would be appropriate that you contacted me by phone as soon as possible to negotiate all details.
flaws:
No. of Words: 199 250
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 199 250
No. of Characters: 824 1200
No. of Different Words: 116 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.756 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.141 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.176 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.267 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.807 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.133 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.663 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in water on the ceiling and walls in the main room should be erased completely as...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36683417085 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26267965011 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1603607427 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8461538462 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252510782182 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829755537102 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663149031584 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135204735829 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634159138676 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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