It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?
It is frequently argued that alteration benefit individuals more than preventing it to happen. I firmly believe that the positive effects of change are greater than its drawback. This essay will discuss why general improvement and having new perspective in life is more advantageous than the period of acceptance.
To begin with, change can make a person be a better version of himself. To improve one's attitude requires someone to change their habit. For example, laziness is a negative attribute of an individual but he can develop into being industrious by simply overcoming the resistance of this unwanted trait. Moreover, people can widen their horizon for personal growth by adapting changes to the direction of their lives. For instance, to migrate and change one's residence is a hard decision to make but a rewarding move afterwards because of the benefits of having more opportunities abroad.
On the other hand, the time to adjust and adapt to such changes would take too long for others. They believe that not all changes are applicable to a situation and some may feel that it is one-sided idea. This especially true for those individuals who are used to doing it everyday, yet at an instant there came another rule to follow. To illustrate this, a new policy is announced for corporate workers to refrain from taking a leave for the rest of the year, so the tendency is they would resist not having that holiday break.
To sum up, the benefits of having change far outweighs the downside of it due to proliferation and brand new vision for the former and the time of approval for the latter. Indeed, it can be said that change is a variable aspect that cannot be avoided and must be embraced on.
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84353741497 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65509254174 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9098906685 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206602653629 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744143907992 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358271678865 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130222343015 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382446837684 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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