TPO 45
The reading passage claims that there is doubt that fossilized has been found in Arizona belong to bees from 200 million years ago and presents three reasons to support its approach. However, the lecturer finds all ideas which have been mentioned by the reading dubious and provides some evidences to refute them all.
At the first place, the reading passage asserts that no fossil remains of actual bees have been discovered from 200 million years ago and the earliest belongs from 100 million years ago. In contrast, the professor dismisses this issue due to the fact that bees could not preserve their nest from 200 million years ago. Trees can produce sticky liquid called resin that helps them to build and preserve their nest. This resin was rare at that time and trees produced it later. So there was no resin and consequently there was no way to preserve their nest.
Furthermore, the author argues that modern bees have a mutually dependent biological relationship by flowers and can get their nutrients from flowers. But there was no flowers from 200 million years ago and they emerged on Earth 125 million years ago. Conversely, the speaker brings up the idea that the bees might feed on non flowering plants. When the flowers appeared, the bees adopted their diet and built new relationship by flowers and eat them as nutrients.
Finally, the reading holds the view that fossilized is not similar to modern nest. The modern nest has chamber that closed by caps and there is an idea that it had been made by other insects such as wood-boring beetles. On the contrary, the lecturer underlines the fact that there are chemical evidences for this type of structure. They build their chamber by caps to protect their nest for water flood and their nest is water proof. According to chemical analysis in fossil, there is some kind of proof material in their structure for aiming their goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 422, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: waterproof
... nest for water flood and their nest is water proof. According to chemical analysis in foss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, so, in contrast, kind of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 325.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86461538462 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28866825181 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501538461538 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9777040867 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0858614959977 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034529094495 0.0996497079465 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217937542535 0.0662205650399 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547718071666 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151142356598 0.0443174109184 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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