Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, people were happier than today?
Undoubtedly, almost all of the people in the world were seeking happiness in the past. But there is no difference in the current attempts to find it. Although some people adamantly claim that, in the past, people were happier, others may take an opposite viewpoint. This issue is so controversial and needs some research to find out what idea is closer to reality. Personally, I think that people now are happier than people who lived several decades ago. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, quick advances were beneficial for the human in the most cases. Such advancements bring more sense of being in a satisfying environment and hence, feeling happier. When somebody talks about this new quick world, the first thing which comes to mind is technological devices which ease our lives such as medical devices, education advances, new utilitarian in the homes, communicational devices, and so on. Each of mentioned advancement has lonely a profound effect on our lives which is undeniable. My own experience can elucidate this argument. I can remember when I was a little girl, about fifteen years ago, my uncle had serious cancer which remained unrecognized until it reached to terminal stages. He died because there was no device to diagnosis his disease. Now, most of the cancers could be diagnosed as soon as possible because of technological advancement.
Second, the standards of living have improved because of the changing in the economic system in this competitive world which is changing quickly. Now, people's welfare has increased and they can afford objects which were a dream for ordinary people in the past. For example, my mother always talks about her life in the past when she forced to do a plenty of housework including washing the clothes or cooking meals for her family and then washing the dishes, cleaning the home and so on. She loved reading romance novels but she had no time to read a book. But now all of these duties can be done by machines in a short time and my mother feels happier when she can do her favorite activities.
All in all, now people in the world are more satisfied compared to the past since the advancement benefit them and, as well as, the people feel more serene because of their improved lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
Undoubtedly, almost all of the people in the world were seeking happin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, then, well, for example, i feel, i think, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84595959596 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62252429156 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580808080808 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6177489066 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.95 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177749809423 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541011211751 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679174425966 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114141540108 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729980136556 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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