The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Creation of mind is the most beautiful thing that god has done on earth. The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds. I agree to the above statement stated. Mind is the most powerful thing on earth that can create as well as destroy anything in the world. If conviction of human is there to achieve what a brain wants then with the power of brain nothing is impossible.
I agree to the above statement by author considering numerous factors stated below. Firstly, mind is the one which created machines. Machines are the ones which makes our lives easy on earth. It creates a difficult task very handy for any being. On the other hand, machines can do task what a human being cannot, despite the fact that machines are evolved my humans. The brain of human has only given birth to transformations like Articifical Intelligence, Machine learning which connects people from any distance. Nowadays, distance does't matter, what matters is the technology which keeps us together, binded. The coalesce of human to human is only possible because of the machines which have been created by human beings in a short span of time because of powerful thing called brain.
We have now reached to the moon because of the techonlogies developed by brain. We are making impossible things possible. A thing like rocket can never be imagined by our ancestors. Rocket was an impossible thing for them to reach to the moon. Illustrating by an example of Elon Musk who is a renown engineer as well as entrepreneur, has taken the risk to connect people from various time zones by designing a hyperloop which is a suspended pipe underwtaer from which people can travel and transport goods. Just like him there are many more who in our past who havve made our lives easier by taking a challenge, striving for it.
In healthcare also brain has a crucial role to play. We haven't lag behind in healthcare. We have put our heart and soul to save a live by designing and fabricating such a machine which can diagnose the root of the problem a man is suffering, to take salient steps towards it. There are several medical tools which are the saviour of many lives in the world. These medical tools are the tools of brain only. Today cure of cancer is possile because of the power of brain, Which could not imagined few years back.
Lets talk about the simplest thing which is created by brian which is a pen, or calcuator, computer. Consequently, it can be anything which is not a part of the body. Machines are the tools of brain which has pave way to make everyone's life simple. This is possible with only usage of brain of 15%. Imagine what if the brain usage is 50%, which is humungous for the engeries that can be created by this much usage of brain.
Lastly I would like to onclude that machines are mere tools of brain which are not possible without brain. Hence, human mind will always be superior to machines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... well as destroy anything in the world. If conviction of human is there to achieve...
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Line 6, column 526, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'distance the doest'.
Suggestion: distance the doest
...cts people from any distance. Nowadays, distance doest matter, what matters is the technology ...
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...nology which keeps us together, binded. The coalesce of human to human is only possible beca...
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Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...him there are many more who in our past who havve made our lives easier by taking a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...so brain has a crucial role to play. We havent lag behind in healthcare. We have put o...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... could not imagined few years back. Lets talk about the simplest thing which is ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'paved', 'paveed'.
Suggestion: paved; paveed
...chines are the tools of brain which has pave way to make everyones life simple. This...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, so, then, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2522.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66173752311 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42988889397 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456561922366 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 788.4 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7026680205 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4242424242 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3939393939 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0303030303 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354752510541 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102641299749 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115700846173 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237562390006 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129643556271 0.0667264976115 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.