When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is argued that when it comes to deciding on what could be done to earn a living, many people would pick the payment to be the first factor to consider. To some extent, I agree with the idea.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons to make salary the top priority. Firstly, money nowadays is the main trading unit. Almost every single item we use on daily basis is through purchasing with cash instead of trading with objects in the ancient times. Secondly, a high-paying job is equal to a highly respected position in an organization. For example, no cooperation owner would be willing to pay a janitor the same amount they offer to an executive director of the marketing department. Since those positions have never been easy to gain as people have to show they are worth it with all their capabilities, obtaining those positions has become a way for many people to prove themselves in life.
On the other hand, I believe that there are much more meanings to a particular job, as it could be out of pure preference. For instance, people working as activists to protect the environment or for animal's rights. Some I had the pleasure to encounter personally were living on a minimum wage, making their lives extremely difficult financially. However, despite all the adversities, they still have been working tirelessly in a great effort to create a better and greener world for our future generations.
In conclusion, while I admit that people have various reasons to choose a job for the salary, I believe that other factors should also be taken into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81318681319 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67566809873 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4841611712 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.076923077 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803879290465 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316532942647 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420098128344 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583055882139 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411687977009 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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