education and country
It is argued that education is one of the most important contributions to the country progress. I completely agree with this opinion.
there are a variety of reasons why development of knowledge has the greatest impact on society. Firstly, It helps foster in the young the morally sound values and outlook on the world and life. The public's awareness will be improved. The number of criminals has degreed significantly. Secondly, education imparts knowledge and professional skill for people. It helps people who become qualified employees. So, people succeed in the life and make contributions to social progress.
On the other hand, knowledge has played a role development technology. It makes contributions to save expense and time lead to enhance productivity. For example, one they a person harvest a rice filed but the machine could harvest ten times. Another benefit boost economic development which improve people's living standard.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that the country could not advancement if it has not education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
... and outlook on the world and life. The publics awareness will be improved. The number ...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'boosts'.
Suggestion: boosts
...ould harvest ten times. Another benefit boost economic development which improve peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36470588235 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00739572816 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2320881552 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.1428571429 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1428571429 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160076559441 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465813318557 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104012648907 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116699494759 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109098211128 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.92 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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