why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

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which sport do is ypur fvorite? i really like...
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which sport do is ypur fvorite? i really like football and swimming. i th...
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...e? i really like football and swimming. i think we could not be able to acount al...
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...e? i really like football and swimming. i think we could not be able to acount al...
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Suggestion: many; numerous
...t be able to acount all sports, because a large number of sports spread around the world. also, t...
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...mber of sports spread around the world. also, there are some sports are very weird a...
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...me sports are very weird and dangerous. like american football, tekvando, boxing and...
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...n football, tekvando, boxing and other. it would be a lot of reasons that why peop...
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...e like this level of violance in sport. i try to extend some importnat reasons ba...
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...e like this level of violance in sport. i try to extend some importnat reasons ba...
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...nd some importnat reasons based on what i thought about this dangerous sport. in...
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... i thought about this dangerous sport. in the first place, some sports have a lom...
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Suggestion: They
...in culture of those country and people. they did this sport for many different reaso...
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Suggestion: many
...try and people. they did this sport for many different reasons. for example if i think correct...
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... this sport for many different reasons. for example if i think correctly, Japan peo...
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... many different reasons. for example if i think correctly, Japan people do Karata...
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Suggestion: It
...tween previlaged and subjugated people. it finally, penetrate to the deep dpeth of...
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Suggestion: The
...many japanes people and stay eith them. the continue these sport to introduces them...
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...many japanes people and stay eith them. the continue these sport to introduces themselves an...
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Suggestion: So
...es and their history to othe countries. so they have to fore some people. so, in t...
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...ries. so they have to fore some people. so, in the other word, some historucal cou...
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... favore of people in dangerous sports. secondly,some people love dangerous sports becau...
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Suggestion: , some
...of people in dangerous sports. secondly,some people love dangerous sports because of...
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Suggestion: I
... because of excitment and its activity. i mean that special harsh and violet natu...
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... because of excitment and its activity. i mean that special harsh and violet natu...
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Suggestion: these
...that special harsh and violet nature of this sports alluring them. if you watch this...
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...et nature of this sports alluring them. if you watch this sportmen, you can see st...
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Suggestion: ,
... watch this sportmen, you can see stress , loud noises after victory,. for example...
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...n see stress , loud noises after victory,. for example in the boxing even spectacu...
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...ee stress , loud noises after victory,. for example in the boxing even spectacular ...
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Suggestion: Boxing
... even spectacular made a lot of noises. boxing is very harsh need intrinsics adventuri...
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Suggestion: I
...s inorder to increase their confidance. i believes these type of sports need some...
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Suggestion: believe
...inorder to increase their confidance. i believes these type of sports need some natural ...
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...ess that should be existed in everyone. persons use it to be more strong and self-confi...
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...t to be more strong and self-confidanc. for example, people are going to american f...
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... people are going to american football. very dangerous sport that has a lot of spect...
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... lot of spectacular betweens americans. my friend is in one of the american teams....
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...friend is in one of the american teams. he said, i want ot show my strength and an...
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... in one of the american teams. he said, i want ot show my strength and and power ...
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...ms. he said, i want ot show my strength and and power in front of thousands of people t...
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...ds of people to increase my conifdance. i do not think as my friend think, but na...
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...ds of people to increase my conifdance. i do not think as my friend think, but na...
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...e he affected by this sport positively. so, some people try to make themseleve as ...
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...ese dangerous sport is a way for them. to make a conclsuion and summarize based o...
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... conclsuion and summarize based on what i said above,differenr people have variou...
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...and summarize based on what i said above,differenr people have various taste about every t...
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Message: Did you mean 'this idea' or 'these ideas'?
Suggestion: this idea; these ideas
... every things and sport is not far from these idea. some poeple like dangerous sports not ...
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...s and sport is not far from these idea. some poeple like dangerous sports not only b...
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...o maybe treying to be more confidances. all to all, i suggests everyone to choose s...
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Suggestion: suggest
...g to be more confidances. all to all, i suggests everyone to choose sports that is not f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i mean, i think, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82197802198 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63653042946 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501098901099 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0008015213 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7741935484 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6774193548 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03225806452 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 5.5376344086 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340445811023 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858785796753 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06266837944 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203470622316 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474460966279 0.0645574589148 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.