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There are many debate among whether the humpbacks navigate using stars or not. The lecture says that the humpbacks are migrating by using other ways rather than the stars. However, the reading argues that the humpbacks are migrating by using the stars and enumerates three reasons of support.
The first point of dispute is that humpbacks are intelligent enough to use stars as a navigator while they are migrating. The lecture says that there is no connection between how humpbacks are intelligent and between their ability to use the stars while they are migrating. For example ducks are not so intelligent and they are able to migrate as well. However, the reading argues that humpbacks brains have a high degree of complexity of intelligent, that is why they could migrate by using the stars.
Another controversial issue is that the humpbacks navigate in straight-line. The lecture says that humpbacks move in straight lines because the have some internal biomagnified force in their body. This biomagnified force is sensitive to the earth magnetic field that help them to move in straight line while they are migrating But, the reading disagrees by saying that the humpbacks move in straight lines because they are orientated by some external feature like land marks.
The final point of dispute is that the humpbacks have an unusual behavior called spy hoppy. The lecture says that the some other animals like sharks have the same behavior and they do not migrate or even look at the stars. Sharks do spy hoppy in the morning while there are no stars in the sky. Also shark are not migrated. Yet, the reading contradicts this point saying that humpbacks are doing this behavior to help them looking at the sky while they are migrated from one place to another.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun debate seems to be countable; consider using: 'many debates'.
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There are many debate among whether the humpbacks navigate u...
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There are many debate among whether the humpbacks navigate using sta...
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...re says that the humpbacks are migrating by using other ways rather than the star...
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...r, the reading argues that the humpbacks are migrating by using the stars and ...
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...rgues that the humpbacks are migrating by using the stars and enumerates three...
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...the humpbacks are migrating by using the stars and enumerates three reasons o...
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... enumerates three reasons of support. The first point of dispute is that hump...
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...support. The first point of dispute is that humpbacks are intelligent enough...
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...wever, the reading argues that humpbacks brains have a high degree of complexity ...
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...hey could migrate by using the stars. Another controversial issue is that the ...
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...ome external feature like land marks. The final point of dispute is that the h...
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...l point of dispute is that the humpbacks have an unusual behavior called spy ho...
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...e is that the humpbacks have an unusual behavior called spy hoppy. The lecture ...
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...the humpbacks have an unusual behavior called spy hoppy. The lecture says that ...
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...led spy hoppy. The lecture says that the some other animals like sharks have the ...
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...ior and they do not migrate or even look at the stars. Sharks do spy hoppy in th...
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...te or even look at the stars. Sharks do spy hoppy in the morning while there are...
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...ing while there are no stars in the sky. Also shark are not migrated. Yet, the re...
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...shark are not migrated. Yet, the reading contradicts this point saying that humpb...
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...radicts this point saying that humpbacks are doing this behavior to help them loo...
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...s are doing this behavior to help them looking at the sky while they are migrated from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02950819672 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64054346039 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459016393443 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4651495541 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 4.19205298013 501% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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