it is more enjoyable to have a job where you working three days every week or five days every week
Some people think that it is better to have a job and work the whole week for only few hours every day. They think that working short days will provide them the opportunity to be more knowledgeable. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that working three days a week is better for me. The basis of my opinion is financial, social and personal.
From the financial perspective, working three days every week will allow people to save more money. When people working three days each week and they work longer hours, they will be able to save their money. For example, people will only go to work three times every week, which mean that they will drive their cars only three times weekly and consequently they will be able save the amount of gas they consume. Further it is beneficial for the company itself. Working three days a week will allow employee to be more productive. Employees would try to finish their work in the three days to get promotions and increase in their payment. Employees will benefit the company by giving the company as much work as they can. Hence, the company will gain a lot of profit because its employees are the best. Working three days every week is the best for both the employees and the company.
Socially, working three days every week will allow employees to have better lives. When employees work only three days they will have the chance to enjoy their lives fairly. For example, employees will have the opportunity to spend more time with their families. They will be able to go for shopping, play with their children and even practice any sport.
Working three days every week will provides the employees the opportunity to increase their social net work and communicate easily with their friend. Employees now have the extra two days free; they can go for vacation or even trip with their friends.
Three days a week is much way beneficial than the five day a week, it allow more time for more fun
Personally, three days a week is the best schedule for me. As I am a mom I have three boys. They need a lot of attention and care. Working only three days every week will help me to provide them with my care. It is better for my children to stay with me than attending daycare or having a baby sitter with them. I can teach my kid more important thing in their lives than the daycare I could also pass on value to my kids. Working three day every week is important and beneficial for all the moms around the world, it will not only help mom to take care of her children but also will allow moms to be more successful in their work.
In conclusion, for the reason I mention above, I encourage all the people to work three days every week. It is beneficial from the financial situation. Socially people will be able to increase their social net work. And finally moms will be able to proceed in both bringing up the children and the career they working on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion is financial, social and personal. From the financial perspective, working ...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l allow employees to have better lives. When employees work only three days they wil...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...rt. Working three days every week will provides the employees the opportunity to increa...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allows'?
Suggestion: allows
...beneficial than the five day a week, it allow more time for more fun Personally, thr...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ays a week is the best schedule for me. As I am a mom I have three boys. They need...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, hence, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2414.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 534.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52059925094 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24753430586 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.365168539326 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2553762543 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8709677419 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2258064516 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41935483871 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 11.8709677419 227% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433478121596 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16329369354 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145952447218 0.0737576698707 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298653364259 0.150856017488 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673567375745 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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