workers are satisfied when they have many different type of tasks to do during the work day than when they do similar tasks all day long
Some people think that doing the same work every day is enjoyable. They believe that by doing similar tasks day after day the work will be easier. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that doing different work during the workday is more preferable for me. The basis of my opinion is social, educational.
From a social perspective, working on different tasks will provides you the opportunity to deal with different kinds of people. If people will have the chance to work on different work stations , they would be able to increase their social net work. For example, I am working in a pharmacy . In the pharmacy there are many tasks to do. First you can type the prescription, second you fill the prescription. Also, there is the cash register responsibility. During my day I have to work through those three work stations . In typing I am dealing with the pharmacists, I have the chance to talk with them and that is good for me, as they provide me with beneficial information. By filling I have contact with other technicians talk to them and also listen to them. That help me to have more friends as I am living in different country. At the register I have the most contact with the public and that help me to communicate easily as I am a shy person.
Educational, working in different tasks is better to do the work in a proper ways. If you are working on the same task every day, you will fell bored. You may hat going to work. But working on different tasks will provides you the chance for learning new things. For example, as I mention above, working on typing help me to learn new skill which is typing fast. Also, filling the prescription is a kind of enjoyment. I am the fastest one doing that in the pharmacy. This task help me how to become more patient. The final task which is working on the register is the most beneficial for me now. As communicating with American people help me to improve my English. Now I can speak English fluently.
In conclusion for the reasons I mention above, I think that working on different tasks are more beneficial. People will have the ability to increase their social net work. They will talk and communicate with different kinds of people. Also working on different task is the best way to learn more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56398104265 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.637236679 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402843601896 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7636894762 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1290322581 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6129032258 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.67741935484 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329040317714 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102672679835 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928425060822 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253127717865 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678402694756 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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