the effect of the internet on the people life
It is irrefutable which internet has an incredible importance in it. As an inseparable part of each modern society, the issue of accessing to information is indissoluble intricate with progress as well as people’s quality of life. Nowadays some may hold the opinion that obtaining information from the internet with a high level of reachability has an incredible effect, others may have a negative attitude toward it. As far as I am concerned, I agree that internet affects society in many different ways my argument for this point are listed as follows.
In the first place, the most important reason for me to choose this position is that people can reach any information whatever and wherever they want. The Internet is a gigantic library with abundant information that people around the world can find the information including science, literature, and etc. without any obstacle and in many cases for free in the lowest time to catch.
For instance, when I was studying chemistry, my major in my B.SC I had to research in a new polymer and give a presentation and I had not much time to prepare it. Firstly I went to a library and there were not only a few books that covered my subject but also no articles in that case. My supervisor suggests me to searching on the internet and finally, I faced to the big portal of relevant information with a high
level of information resorting which help me to prepare my presentation as soon as possible. So I feel that internet has a good impact in finding information to people.
In the second place, the internet opens a free media that people can break government boundary of restriction. They make it to precise aims to hiding some problems they don’t want people to know and do whatever they like. For example, 2 years ago we found from the internet that one of the movement’s
member took a bribe from someone to steal much money that belonged to investing a project in making a highway in my town. The reporter did a quite research and the local media didn’t say anything about that because the government doesn't let them manifest that. But from the internet, everyone heard it owing with this situation government had to dismiss its member and sent him to court and gave him 30 years in jail.
So I think that internet brings freedom in any information without any relation to anyone.In conclusion, taking account all of these factors I conclude that internet has affected peoples life for many years. It helps people to reach information in the best way in short time and also help people to hear the news that someone in their country doesn’t want people to know them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in short, as well as, in many cases, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77826086957 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76733580326 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3358395282 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.111111111 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293768335909 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851140790144 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673015249114 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134892924476 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949671666504 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.