Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high, while others argue that sports salaries are fair.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the paid salaries to athletes. While a group of individuals argue that these payments are high, others however refute this. I believe that this is a positive scheme and the salaries are fine.
There are various reasons why I would argue that the funds paid to championships is fair. Firstly, they represent a country in a spactacular way and people all over the globe will become familier with the country's culture, customs and traditions which will be a positive propaganda and will improve the tourist industry. Secondly, the athletes can play professionally for just a short period of time and they should be futuristic to save money for the future. Take for example, Pele who was a great footbal player and got retired while he was in his 20s. Finally, the sport injuries are usually severe and sometimes lead to losing a part of body or debilitating diseases such as stroke or heart attack.
On the other hand, a group of fellows argue that the sports incomes are too high. It is proved that some sort of jobs such as teaching, medication, law and farming are crucial in the society since they influence the people's life in various ways. Furthermore, the majority of athletes do not have enough academic education and they earn large amount of money just because of their fame. Besides, champions are role models in the society and youngsters follow their life style which has a great impact on the quality of next generation's life and consequently, young people will drop out of high school or university to become famous and earn money easily. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that in 2008 almost 20% of pupils decided to quit education to become a prominent sport athlete.
In conclusion, although the professional sportspeople earn large amount of money, the smallest error during the matches or trainings will cost them their lives. I believe their income is fair since they risk their health and lives to play in different sport events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...an play professionally for just a short period of time and they should be futuristic to save m...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...in the society since they influence the peoples life in various ways. Furthermore, the ...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...s a great impact on the quality of next generations life and consequently, young people wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, sort of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90830945559 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56538377532 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595988538682 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1348623652 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229807050189 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809072798684 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727449334599 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145963836375 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928759721524 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.