Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
The issue at hand is what is you reaction when you fail, is important for you to remain happy and optimistic than achieving success when you fail.
The issue is important because human always confront problem and your reaction is important on life.
I believe that remain happy and optimistic when you fail is the better option because human will get discouragement and hopeless for trying to get his goal and new innovation don't get for solving problem.
In my point of view, remain happy and optimistic when you fail is preferable because if human get discouragement and hopeless for trying to get his goal, his effort will stop to get his goal.
additionally, remain happy and optimistic, when you fail is better because humans affect each other.
If people of society want to be innovative and energetic, they must be full of energy against problems and during the life.
If person in group or society be hopeless or discouragement, he can affect on group or society. As a consequently, he will cause group or society discouragement to get the goal.
Finally, I think remain happy and optimistic when you fail is the right choice because if human doesn't remain happy and optimistic, he will not get any effort to reach his goal then new innovation will not get for solving problem.
Ultimately, I feel that remain happy and optimistic when you fail is the correct one.
I believe this because hopeless and discouragement will get human to stop for getting the goal and world will not see any new innovation.
- Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Older teenager (16-19) should be allowed to work at paid part-time job? 63
- do you agree or disagree with the following statement?there should be limitations on the outfit people wear to work and school. 73
- do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Improving schools is the most important factor the successful development of a country. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Older teenager (16-19) should be allowed to work at paid part-time job? 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...hopeless for trying to get his goal and new innovation dont get for solving problem. In my ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ying to get his goal and new innovation dont get for solving problem. In my point...
^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...is effort will stop to get his goal. additionally, remain happy and optimistic, when you ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 69, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...y be hopeless or discouragement, he can affect on group or society. As a consequently, he...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...society discouragement to get the goal. Finally, I think remain happy and optimi...
^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...il is the right choice because if human doesnt remain happy and optimistic, he will no...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 183, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...t get any effort to reach his goal then new innovation will not get for solving problem. Ul...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 123, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...ing the goal and world will not see any new innovation.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, so, then, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 52.1666666667 35% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 261.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87356321839 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7332163582 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406130268199 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2235581575 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297448530179 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154913553911 0.076458572812 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167788554167 0.0737576698707 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170404909302 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168310712048 0.0645574589148 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.