Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In today's world, technology seems to have permeated each and every crevice of our day to day lives. We cannot leave the house without our cell phones, our cars can send messages to our loved ones while directing us where to go, and by simply asking a question to empty air, our computers can proclaim an answer without hesitation. With such rapidly advancing technology, one may believe that our lives will become overcrowded and complicated. However, this abundance of technology is simplifying our lives and creating a dynamic and exciting world.
The ease that accompanies this kind of advanced technology makes our lives significantly less complicated and confusing. For example, our phones, tablets, and computers have the ability to plan our day, making it possible for us to complete tasks with far more efficiancy and speed. Agendas are automatically planned for us, notifying us what time our appointments are and how early we must leave the house to get there on time. A modern cell phone is even able to recognize that you have not left the house yet and activate a reminder alarm. This kind of technology has become vital within the face paced modern world. The fact that our computers, phones, and watches are able to complete these menial tasks for us allows us to focus our brainpower on complex problems, saving time and effort.
One arena in which technology has boomed greatly in the past century is within the automotive world. Our society today is highly transient, and it is rare that any household not have a vehicle parked in the driveway. Years ago, a car was only capable of transporting one from place to place. However, nowadays, cars are nearly autonomous. No matter how lost we are, with a simple push of a button, they are able to guide us home. GPS is able to redirect the driver away from traffic, ensuring that the passangers are able to reach their destination with time to spare. Certain high tech cars are even equipped with the technology to detect whether the driver is inebriated by testing blood alcohol level - if they test above the legal limit, the car will not turn on. This kind of technology has the ability to save lives and make the road much safer. Not only that, it allows for the user to have a more simplified driving experience - their car does the work for them, giving them the freedom relax, comforted by the knowledge that the vehicle will not allow them to get lost or be late.
Despite the ease and simplicity that technology seems to bring to our lives, this technology boom drastically impacted the kinds of lives humans now lead. Those born prior to cell phones, computers, autonomous vehicles, and Siri often reminisce about the simplicity of life prior to these advancements. They remember a time when it was instinct to play outside in order to alleviate boredom. Instead of sending vague pick-up lines through a dating app, teenagers simply picked up the phone and made a call to their romantic interest, asking to see a movie or take a walk together. With the influx of technology, these pastimes fell by the wayside. In that way, technology has actually complicated our lives, causing us to forget the "simpler times. "
Nowadays, a screen is rarly farther than a few footsteps away. Giant computers have been reduced to compact sizes, capable of sitting on our wrists. We can track our health, plan our daily agendas, and calculate the fastest route with a simple push of a button. These advancements in technology undoubtedly make our lives simpler, exerting effort on our behalf so that we can focus on tasks that are better suited for the dynamic human brain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, kind of, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 33.0505617978 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3027.0 2235.4752809 135% => OK
No of words: 625.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8432 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56882204308 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 326.0 215.323595506 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5216 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 969.3 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3176174102 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.379310345 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5517241379 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.62068965517 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226955194599 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572329303468 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440790743625 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130636383273 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403165451675 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 100.480337079 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.