Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
In today's society has getting harder and harder because there is many businesses organizing and it makes effective to entering in any community for young people. The companies need only qualified people which written in the statement. So I agree with it is important for young people to have planning and organizing ability for these reasons which will mention below.
The organizations searching worker who is hardworking and well self assignment young people. In this era, the companies don't searching the super knowledgement people, but they need a worker who do the best for the company's required job. In that way, the best identified useful key is a ability of planning and organizing. For instance, if the boss ordered you a part of company's important job, you have to do it as planned day by day.
In other hand, for second reason of all is you don't have to work under someone. You can work alone and build your own business. However, you won't take any order from someone, you will face with problem if you aren't qualified with any ability of these two. For some situation in that term, simply, you will lead group of people, and have to do in any step both of plan and organize.
In third, this is young people's acknowledgement and ability is improving very quickly as much as we expect in this society. This ability is teached in high school and everybody has owned it due to I can't stay back of them, or I will left without any profit and can't survive.
In conclusion, I agree with that statement which planning and organizing is essential ability for young people because the reasons mentioned above. In addition, this isn't enough ability to survive in this era and faced with situation which learn more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are many businesses'?
Suggestion: there are many businesses
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oung people. In this era, the companies dont searching the super knowledgement peopl...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r hand, for second reason of all is you dont have to work under someone. You can wor...
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Suggestion: aren't
...eone, you will face with problem if you arent qualified with any ability of these two...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...and organize. In third, this is young peoples acknowledgement and ability is improvin...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ool and everybody has owned it due to I cant stay back of them, or I will left witho...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, third, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53915121426 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7340336057 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381273714685 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128716186599 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996814154175 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207148388004 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698291492885 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.