Writing task 1 (a letter)
You’re moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say
– When and where do you move?
– Why do you move out?
– How do you feel about it?
Dear Jay,
Hope this letter finds you well. You have been a great neighbour and any family like your company as their neighbours. Me and my wife leaving this apartment and going to move abroad next month as I got my Permanent Residency visa for Canada and so happy that finally our dream came true. I want to personally say Goodbye to you through this letter.
Thank you so much for being very friendly and thoughtful neighbor. You made us feel welcome in the neighborhood when we just transferred here and you have become very good friends of ours. We have enjoyed several years of our stay in the town because of you and we are so grateful. Frankly speaking, it's hard to leave your company as nowadays its hard to find a neighbour like you. We will miss you a lot. We know you will continuous to bring joy and love to others who will stay in the neighborhood and we hope that you will never change your kind ways.
Kind Regards,
Divya
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| 2019-06-22 | Amanpreet_1990 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, frankly, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4367816092 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29499676973 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9336567938 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1818181818 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288286714011 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113643695151 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618487956706 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226551682871 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203376907926 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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