Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Life planning plays an crucial role in today’s life. In that there are two view existing, one favour that future planing is better for both nation.whilst, others hold that enjoyment of present life is very valuable than it.Although I agree with this idea on safety basis but I also think that nobody know that what will happen in future.
As a matter of fact thinking for future is good idea for individuals. This is an important factor because one should have enough money for their comfort and also unpredictable journey such as future goal , house and education. For example during the pandemic many sri lanka habitants lost their job and they have not enough money therefore they were in trouble but many residents have enough money during this situation so they could survive easily. Hence , this suggestion is well justified.
However, this idea creates biase thinking of life uncertainty. Nowadays life changing have become very common and no one sure about their future so many individuals worldwide spend their whole money for shopping, travelling and buy costly things like gold , luxurious car instead of saving it future. They only think for their present enjoyment because they feel their future is unpredictable. Hence, this advice dose not stand here.
In the bottom line, the given advice has been explored from both the side and it allows me to write that there is a no doubt about the present situation and it’s positive and negative side but it is also important to consider its impacts not only in the present time but perhaps in the future advice also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Suggestion: Although
...f present life is very valuable than it.Although I agree with this idea on safety basis ...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... that nobody know that what will happen in future. As a matter of fact thinking for fu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...npredictable journey such as future goal , house and education. For example during...
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...tion so they could survive easily. Hence , this suggestion is well justified. H...
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...justified. However, this idea creates biase thinking of life uncertainty. Nowa...
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...t time but perhaps in the future advice also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95488721805 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42151579683 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.9017047944 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.818181818 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241156350877 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923914909163 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813386202996 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143794832633 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401940010331 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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