Some people think that enjoying the present time is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals to what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is irrefutable that 'Future is unpredictable'.A group of people opine that one should have the advantage of current period despite of the worries and make plans for the upcoming time as it would be more beneficial and pertinent for nation and themselves. Here, we will take a look on both sides of arguments.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view, that no one predicts future so one should not worried about it. First and foremost, people who were overthink and make extraordinary plans for their future are attracting numerous ailments such as depression and anxiety and excessive aggression. Because, sometimes outcomes doesn't match with their plans. Apart from this, when a person commence to live in their present it become fruitful for the person and for its kith and kins. Moreover, scientist elaborated in their theory that future thoughts and goals stress dwindle the life expectancy and unstable mental health. Furthermore, enjoying live moments makes the person efficient to cater with the dilemmas of unpredicted period and being courageous.
Numerous points can be mentioned to support latter view, that life is worthless without a planned future. The reason is, that it has been observed that students focus on studies only when they are inspired to become successful in life by achieving their aims. Additionally, people with unplanned future lose their sincerity and punctuality which affect their working space and become perilous for their jobs. Despite this, it might affect countries growth by virtue of nations development is utterly based on their citizens actions.
To conclude from above confabulation it is axomatic that it is necessary to enjoy the present time to stay healthy and mentally fit however one should also occupy with their future goals which assist them to meet their needs and grow country
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is irrefutable that Future is unpredictable...
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Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...rrefutable that Future is unpredictable.A group of people opine that one should ...
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Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is unpredictable.A group of people opine that one should have the advantage of cu...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'worry'
Suggestion: worry
...o one predicts future so one should not worried about it. First and foremost, people wh...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... foremost, people who were overthink and make extraordinary plans for their futur...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n and anxiety and excessive aggression. Because, sometimes outcomes doesnt match with t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...aggression. Because, sometimes outcomes doesnt match with their plans. Apart from this...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...on commence to live in their present it become fruitful for the person and for its kit...
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Line 3, column 732, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o cater with the dilemmas of unpredicted period and being courageous. Numerous...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21070234114 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6006823155 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.13163457 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194231367273 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064186230381 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599401110838 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128605626745 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049392322076 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is irrefutable that Future is unpredictable...
^^
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...rrefutable that Future is unpredictable.A group of people opine that one should ...
^
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is unpredictable.A group of people opine that one should have the advantage of cu...
^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'worry'
Suggestion: worry
...o one predicts future so one should not worried about it. First and foremost, people wh...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... foremost, people who were overthink and make extraordinary plans for their futur...
^^
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n and anxiety and excessive aggression. Because, sometimes outcomes doesnt match with t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...aggression. Because, sometimes outcomes doesnt match with their plans. Apart from this...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...on commence to live in their present it become fruitful for the person and for its kit...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 732, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o cater with the dilemmas of unpredicted period and being courageous. Numerous...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21070234114 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6006823155 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.13163457 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194231367273 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064186230381 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599401110838 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128605626745 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049392322076 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.