Writing task 1 (a letter)
You live in a rental accommodation. Due to a recent bad weather event there was a small amount of damage to your apartment. Write a letter to your landlord and say
– What was damaged and why?
– How is this damage causing you a problem?
– What would you like your landlord to do about it?
Dear Peter,
Hope this letter finds you well as all faced hurricane last week. I am Divya, your tenant living in your apartment number 12 in New South Street. Last week’s weather due to hurricane wrecked a huge damage to almost all coastal properties in Houston. I am writing this letter to inform you that the damage to my house was much more severe and it needs to be urgently fixed.
Strong winds from the North done a heavily damage to city's infrastructure in general and to this house in particular. The storm somehow affected the outer walls and destroyed a portion of the house’s heating system. Consequently, the drawing room’s and bathroom’s heating systems are not working. Moreover, a few wide cracks have appeared in the house’s roof.
Since the city is cold outside, and cracks in the structure are dangerous, I believe you need to urgently fix this issue. Please call a heating systems contractor and a construction contractor, and get the repair estimate prepared quickly. I am sure the property is insured against damage caused by weather. The insurance company will release the funds immediately.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge damage'.
Suggestion: huge damage
...apos;s weather due to hurricane wrecked a huge damage to almost all coastal properties in Hou...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('heavily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('damage') instead of another adjective.
...ed. Strong winds from the North done a heavily damage to citys infrastructure in general and ...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'systems'' or 'system's'?
Suggestion: systems'; system's
...y fix this issue. Please call a heating systems contractor and a construction contracto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, look, moreover, so, well, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18781725888 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85687155226 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670050761421 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6714818018 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255023703546 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767511816982 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746578903099 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129391578351 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105954754981 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.