The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The diagram provides us information about the proportion of Australian people of various age groups and sexes who engaged in physical exercises regularly in 2010.
In summary, it could be mentioned that women were more active in doing sport over this period. Besides, the highest rate of activity among men was noticed among males aged 15 to 24, whereas women who were from 45 to 54 years old did physical exercises the most. Also, it should not be neglected that levels of physical activity among pensioners of both sexes are almost the same.
As far as women are concerned, the number of people interested in physical activity rose with their age. Starting from approximately 48% for the age group 15 to 24, the figure experienced a significant rise going through older generations, to reach a peak of 53.3% among females who were in their middle ages in 2010. However, this upward trend was broken, as the proportion fell by 0.3% and 6.2% for the 55 to 64 and over 65 age groups respectively.
Regarding males, this appears to reflect the women proportion conversely. The biggest popularity of sport was marked among individuals aged 15 to 24 accounting for 52.8%. However, the representatives of next age groups (from 25 to 34, from 35 to 44 and from 45 to 54) showed less involvement in physical activity, as the figure did not exceed a level of 43%. Surprisingly, more people of older ages were engaged in sport (45.1% and 46.7% for next age categories).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, conversely, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80158730159 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72892413946 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9822867016 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29529346824 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111247704545 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656160852563 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194677965605 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395500928261 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.