Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
With the advent of technology, some people believe that the internet has made relationship of other better for the reason that through the use of it, it makes a lot easier to share, inform and give update to others most specially to our love ones who are located afar. And in contrary, some claimed that by using it makes locality isolated with other groups due to the reason that the information posted creates indifference and sometimes destroys group members relationship.
Through the use of internet it eases the transfer and exchange information from one person to another. By just one click of the mouse, a person can give an update to everyone into what had happen to his or her day making them feel your are just near. For instance, people nowadays use social media to post events that had occur in their life and for people who are afar would be able to read it.
On the other hand, some ague that relationships were broken and boundaries were built through the ideas and information that are seen via internet due to the reason that other’s posted information hurts other because sometimes they abused on what they share. The other group has a belief that they support same as to the other creating indifference.
To my way of thinking, I believe that it can improve the relationship due to my personal experience since I have family member that is working abroad having the internet made communication to him a lot easier. Another, is the use of internet comes with great responsibility. It can build or destroy one’s belief. And also if it happens it creates bridge or wall to others. In relation to this, people must be objective, open-minded and decisive upon dealing what we see in the internet.
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| 2017-11-01 | Fiona Joanna Cruz | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o others most specially to our love ones who are located afar. And in contrary, s...
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Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'members'' or 'member's'?
Suggestion: members'; member's
...difference and sometimes destroys group members relationship. Through the use of int...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...ive an update to everyone into what had happen to his or her day making them feel your...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...ive an update to everyone into what had happen to his or her day making them feel your...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'occurred'.
Suggestion: occurred
...se social media to post events that had occur in their life and for people who are af...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'occurred'.
Suggestion: occurred
...se social media to post events that had occur in their life and for people who are af...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79598662207 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65029012797 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555183946488 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0003703695 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.25397266985 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16168568188 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569701229792 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468030715715 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101117417234 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205201521598 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.