Which one do you prefer? Living in rural areas or in cities.
Nowadays, the population of cities is growing. Cities are crowded and polluted. Although many people prefer to live in rural areas, I personally prefer living in cities. The reasons for my choice are manifold, among which education, medical services, and job opportunities are the most paramount ones.
At first, today one of the most important parameters for being successful is having high education. There are many high rank schools and universities in the big cities; however, in the countryside finding developed universities is almost impossible. For example, all high rank universities like MIT, Oxford, and Sharif in my country are in developed cities. Therefore, students should live in cities to access these universities.
Secondly, somebody thinks that they can be healthier by living in rural because of the fresh air and blue sky. Nonetheless, I consider that people can live longer in cities because of medical services. By developed medical instrument, everybody can well-being. As an illustration, the rate of death in the countryside is very high due to lack of medical instrument and the time of servicing to a patient. Also, if a contagious disease spread in rural, it is very hard to stop the disease with lack of equipment. For these reasons, I think people can be healthier in the cities.
Additionally, not only we can find more job opportunities in the big cities but also it is suitable for more income. There are two main reasons. In cities, the range of jobs is wider. As a result, finding a job is not hard. Besides, all family members can find a relevant job with suited income; thus, they can have a comfortable life.
As a conclusion, the place which chosen for a living can be very important for having a pleasant life. Personally, I believed that urban living is beneficial in many terms for reasons including have better education, developed medical services and many job opportunities.
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- TPO- 47 61
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- Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea? 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Which one do you prefer Living in rural areas or in cities 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06289308176 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93090533515 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51572327044 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5959754248 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171014773853 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052197171242 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766364640354 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104949741395 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721815489393 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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