Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that it is a good idea to offer amount of money by the parents to their children for each high grade they get in the school, some people may agree with this idea and give us sounds reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that offering amount of money by the parents to their children for their succeed is a great idea because of many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the life today is very hard. So, the it is a good idea to learn the children who to earn money during their early life stage. When the parents give their children money for the good grade that they get in the school, that will learn the child how to work hard and doing his best to earn money. And that has good consequences for the child ability to manage his time and resources in best way.
Another point why I advocate that it is a good idea to give the child sum of money when he gets good marks in the school is the rapid development of the technology. Today the life develops rapidly and everyone tries to follow the technology by buying the new devices. So, if the child learns how to manage his resources to reach his goal and buy what he need, that will build the child’s character. Eventually, that has great impact on the child’s life because he will understand how to use his money in a suitable way and puts priorities for his requirements.
Finally, it is well-established fact that all the parents looking for seeing their children succeed in the school. So, the money will be a good motivator for the children to work ward in order to manage their resources and gain the gifts. Moreover, that money makes the child feel how his parent take care of his study. So, he will do his best to make them feel proud of him.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which says that, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion, and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
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Message: Consider replacing "in a suitable way" with adverb for "suitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he will understand how to use his money in a suitable way and puts priorities for his requirement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50361445783 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37004091058 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457831325301 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9845624237 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.941176471 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336661256187 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11636888279 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12238613671 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183290162298 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123085588427 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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