Today prison is the most common solution for crime. But some people think that it would be a more effective way to provide them with better education to prevent them from becoming criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In most of the countries, the common way to deal with the crime is imprisonment, however, according to some persons, there other ways exists and one of the ways is to educate people and provide opportunities for better life. I believe that prison will continue to deter the crimes but quality education shall divert people from criminal activities.
On the one hand, prison is widely used way to control the crime across countries. In general, people who are threat to society should be kept away from general public. Some criminal are petty criminals and others are dangerous such as murderers, terrorist etc. These dangerous criminals can be harmful to society and nation as well so it is required to imprison them until it is proved that they can live with general public. For example, notorious international terrorist Abu Salem was nabbed by international police and sent to India for trails in court and awarded life imprisonment for killing innocent people. Such hardcore criminals can’t be handled through soft measures and confinement is the best option for them.
On the other hand, it is also known that people sometime perpetrate crime out of the circumstances or in self-defense. Not every murderer or thieves are dangerous or threat to society as sometime situation force people to take path which is not lawful and crime is committed, perhaps their intentions are not harmful for society. For instance, local mayor of my city is alleged for unlawful activities in initials days as he stole money for deposit his brother’s fee in school and later on he was also got admission in school and became lawful citizen. Various such kinds of cases can be found in our neighborhood and early sight of these cases and provide the financial help and education can prevent these people to become criminals.
To conclude, though modern thinkers start to believe that prison is not the effective solution for crime, I believe that hardcore criminal should be kept in prison. For other criminal who has minor offence history, may be provided a better education and financial help to include them in mainstream of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...eat to society should be kept away from general public. Some criminal are petty criminals and ...
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Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...il it is proved that they can live with general public. For example, notorious international t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03672316384 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69385646448 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545197740113 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8590747321 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.357142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312288345828 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103537224467 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635904071585 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204082939132 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639058482696 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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