Do you agree or disagree that student should participate in lectures of classes?
Parisa Mohamadi:
Based on my experience , adolecence is the time when the most important of our mental attitudes take form ,as result educational system have to pay more attention to the teaching methods ,based on that students are trained ,they have so much potential for probing into different subjects ,because of that schools should provide them situations to elevate this ability ,as far as i'm concerned teachers have to allocate most of the class time to discussing ,and it lead to have more creative students ,wherease other hold opposite oppinion , in the following paragraphs i pursue my point of view.
First of all , to challenge an idea make it to be more comprehensible for students ,on the other hand when students are asked for a subject they begin to analyzing and considering advantages and disadvantages of that idea consequently they master their courses and their visibility about every thing will extend , also this method boost the creativity of brain and play an important role in their future successness not only in job or university invironment but also in their personal life when they assesst all corners of a problem and make the best decesion .
Second ,discussing an idea ,enhance their tolerance ,I mean when they hear apposite comments, learn how to be patient and cooperate with class instead of blindly defense of their opinion ,that is the fisrt step of working in group ,consequently in future they will be more open minded and their social characteristics will be more beneficial for country
Wheather they be a boss of company or an employee ,they will consult with their co-worker for system progress
Last but not least,After graduating from highschool started studying in university , one of the most biggest problem that students faced with as soon as they start studying at university
Is not knowing how apply their knowledge , taking note to pass their courses is what they know from highschool they are just passive persons .who are not able to research and even give a lecture or present subjects on their own way . They rely on just their notes and have mostly not other idea.this is the weakness of educational system.
Finally ,It would be better if teachers and generally whole of educational system put their traditional teaching methods away and make opportunity for student to take a part in class ,that lead to a more dynamics society where people wont be just listener and satisfied to what governers provide them .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, so, whereas, i mean, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21065375303 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.826558527 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607748184019 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 103.0 20.1344086022 512% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 257.754122178 48.9658058833 526% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 538.0 100.406767564 536% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 103.25 20.6045352989 501% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.25 5.45110844103 482% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 75.0 5.5376344086 1354% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0693517858423 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495429290382 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172660819663 0.0737576698707 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0346582140954 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229541801699 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.7 11.7677419355 465% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -33.07 58.1214874552 -57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.5 10.1575268817 428% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.1 8.01818996416 163% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 10.002688172 560% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 43.2 10.0537634409 430% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 44.0 10.247311828 429% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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