Someone speaks but don't follow it in reality. Society accepts people with action not on basis of spoken words
It’s easy to say but hard to do. Society today is flashier than what it actually is. Nobody is really going to help you even if they say it how many times. In your good time’s people will stay with you, praise you, and tell you to call them whenever needed but when actually the crisis hits no one is there.
Society accepts people with action not on words because actions speak louder than words. One should always be careful before speaking anything or making any promises because you can never take your words back. As we know it is said that “Uttering the words are like arrows out of command.”
Many a time’s people are forgotten but their words aren’t. There is a reason why society doesn’t accept people with just words because “No rain that roared”. You will find many people who do big promises and when the time arrives to fulfill them they are always lost. Always trust your instincts and other’s actions, not their words.
We study about our legends and ancestors not only because of what they said but also they did what they said. The great Mahatma Gandhi said that “The difference between what we do and what we are capable of doing would suffice to solve most of the world’s problems” which always reflected in his actions. He fought till the end for the freedom but with peace. He did what he always spoke about. Always think before speaking because a single word spoken adequately or inadequately can make a lot of difference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53149101234 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0960150809 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0666666667 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275557406877 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101441900807 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115941130263 0.071462118173 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187703879101 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981427826805 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.