Is it usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree”
Nowadays, marriage has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "is it advantageous before finishing studies?" Although a wedding is regarded as thoroughly both positive and constructive, I disagree with getting married before getting a good job.
From an educational standpoint, academics background is indeed bound up tightly with focusing on education, which means it might lead to both getting a proper career and massive literacy. For example, a group of profound educationalists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between jon promotions in workplace, well-educated persons, managers, and married clerks. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that completing studies before marrying is correlated positively with not only college-educated people but also well-paid occupations.
In economic terms, technical jobs is undoubtedly attributable to single persons, in that it might lead to having the opportunity to eran more money, a happy marriage, and financial problems. A well-known example of such attributions is productive workers, which is cause for concern since they had been mistaken to take socio-economic conditions for granted. Had they married their wives in advance, they might have had the opportunity to save money. Thus, marital status could play a significant role in progressing in careers.
To recapitulate, I entirely disagree with getting married prior to copmleting educational issues. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommmended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Nowadays, marriage has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8862745098 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35110831684 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694117647059 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8531771235 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.1 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216819708391 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746247104346 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935420692476 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136117117561 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10494290729 0.0609392437508 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 12.6369458128 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 11.5310837438 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.