Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The topic of the essay is very sensitive and controversial also. The topic is whether the parents are the best teacher or not. According to me, the parents are definitely good teacher but not the best. I do not agree with the topic because of three reasons: the educational qualification of all the parents are not adequate, the parents are not trained as a real teacher and sometimes parents do not have sufficient time to spend with their children.
First and foremost, to teach someone, one should have sufficient academic background. If one does not have enough knowledge, he cannot convey his knowledge to other. As a result, the student will not learn the curriculum. For instance, I know a friend whose parents are not literate and can not teach him. That's why he goes to the tuition-teacher to learn his lessons. In addition to that, when the one studies in higher classes like masters and Ph.D. level, he certainly needs one well-qualified teacher to guide him. Therefore, it is not supportable that the parents are the best teacher.
Secondly, One trained person can train his disciple very proficient way. The teachers of the schools or the universities are very trained, well educated and very experienced in their profession. For that, they are very good at preparing the students and better than the parents. For example, now in the university and the school, the teachers are selected depending on their qualification, training, and experience. Therefore, the teachers are the obviously better teacher than parents.
Finally, most of the parents are the working professional.They have their jobs or their business and they can not spend enough time to teach their children. I know one of my friend's parents are a businessman and spend their whole month out of the country for business. For that, the friend is compelled to go to the tuition and coaching classes to complete his course-work.
In conclusion, I am not agreeing with the statement that the parents are the perfect teacher. The main reasons of my disagreement are - all the parents are not well educated, they are not trained like a teacher and the parents stay busy with their profession so they don't have enough time for their kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...say is very sensitive and controversial also. The topic is whether the parents are t...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...he parents are the best teacher or not. According to me, the parents are definitely good teache...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...are not literate and can not teach him. Thats why he goes to the tuition-teacher to l...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...he parents are the working professional.They have their jobs or their business and t...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...te his course-work. In conclusion, I am not agreeing with the statement that the parents are...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...stay busy with their profession so they dont have enough time for their kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95978552279 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82205540037 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458445040214 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6821187669 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0952380952 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131465898781 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489299616039 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733904838931 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890307678494 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784976353093 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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