Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'do'.
Suggestion: sometimes do
...any people could agree with the idea to do sometimes things they are not comfortable with be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...lt more enjoyable. Personally, I strong believe that is better to avoid doing things th...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'realised'.
Suggestion: realised
...erotonine is a natural horomona that is realise when we are delight for some situation....
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oing things that are enjoyable provokes the realise of cerotonine; thus, it would make us h...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'do'.
Suggestion: sometimes do
... provide that claims that people should do sometimes things that are not enjoyable, because ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, briefly, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63414634146 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52051038461 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505226480836 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6351886015 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393518541716 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137594940888 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108138049018 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243768858953 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484321454894 0.0645574589148 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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