Do you agree or disagree with this following statement?the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide .Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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...st delightful activities that people do,  it is also strongly recommended by psych...
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...from depression and increasing longevity  as result ,each individual desire to tur...
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...sion and increasing longevity  as result ,each individual desire to turn traveling...
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...dividual desire to turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience ...
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... desire to turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience , person...
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... turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience , personally i ten...
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... better  and more  beneficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group w...
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...ore  beneficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group wherease other...
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...ficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group wherease other may hold ...
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...up wherease other may hold opposite view .in the following paragraphs i will advoc...
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...osite view .in the following paragraphs i will advocate my view for.  some reaso...
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...will advocate my view for.  some reason . First ,however i admit that sometimes ...
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...cate my view for.  some reason . First ,however i admit that sometimes people ar...
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...ew for.  some reason . First ,however i admit that sometimes people are require...
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...em and find a way to recover theirselves ,but  journey accompanied others is more ...
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...d find a way to recover theirselves ,but  journey accompanied others is more helpf...
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...rney accompanied others is more helpfull .it  boosts  persons social character i m...
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... accompanied others is more helpfull .it  boosts  persons social character i mean ...
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...nied others is more helpfull .it  boosts  persons social character i mean  makes  ...
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...l .it  boosts  persons social character i mean  makes  persons apportunity to lea...
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... boosts  persons social character i mean  makes  persons apportunity to learn how ...
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...  persons social character i mean  makes  persons apportunity to learn how spend  ...
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...  persons apportunity to learn how spend  happy times with others ,broaden  their ...
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...learn how spend  happy times with others ,broaden  their own horizon and finally m...
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... spend  happy times with others ,broaden  their own horizon and finally make new f...
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...ake new freinds. Some of groups members  have more  tallent to cheer others ,ones...
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...inds. Some of groups members  have more  tallent to cheer others ,ones who crack ...
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...bers  have more  tallent to cheer others ,ones who crack funny jokes motivates oth...
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...tivates other members to be more dynamic ,Therefore  persons who are ashamed of ta...
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...er members to be more dynamic ,Therefore  persons who are ashamed of talking in gr...
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... confident little by little. In addition ,when members gather toghether  ,they dis...
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... addition ,when members gather toghether  ,they discuss various affairs and exchan...
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...addition ,when members gather toghether  ,they discuss various affairs and exchang...
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...fairs and exchange views and information ,that lead to extending thaughts and enha...
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...thaughts and enhancing their capacity to  accept each other without  respect to  r...
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...r capacity to  accept each other without  respect to  race or religious beliefs.al...
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...o  accept each other without  respect to  race or religious beliefs.also persons w...
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...sons who treat kindly absord others and most of members desire to keep in touch with them after...
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...in touch with them after the end of trip . Second,traveling on tour is more arran...
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...ith them after the end of trip . Second,traveling on tour is more arranged, tours usually...
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...r is more arranged, tours usually create  a schedule beforehand and appointe a per...
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...our leader to guide groups based on that .tour leader also  is quietly  familiar w...
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...e groups based on that .tour leader also  is quietly  familiar with natural or his...
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...ed on that .tour leader also  is quietly  familiar with natural or historical attr...
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...istorical attraction of different places  ,as result groups member wont miss  visi...
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...storical attraction of different places  ,as result groups member wont miss  visit...
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...aces  ,as result groups member wont miss  visiting any of them. As it was mentione...
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...isiting any of them. As it was mentioned , tours plan for every  motion in advance...
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... it was mentioned , tours plan for every  motion in advance even the time of eatin...
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...rticipants will have minimum wasted time . Finally i put in proposal ,if persons ...
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...wasted time . Finally i put in proposal ,if persons want to be more open minded i...
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...ons want to be more open minded it would  be more suitable to experience meeting n...
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...uitable to experience meeting new people,in this order traveling on tour could be a...
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...aveling on tour could be a good occasion .in addition its going to have less consu...
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...e and money in comparision of going trip  randomely with family or lonely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, whereas, i mean, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71581805625 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649859943978 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.1344086022 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.366793274 48.9658058833 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.714285714 100.406767564 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 20.6045352989 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 5.45110844103 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 58.0 5.5376344086 1047% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129054330099 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634024191505 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450896911704 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718343432228 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415941055238 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 11.7677419355 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 58.1214874552 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.1575268817 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.01818996416 133% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.0537634409 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.