Do you agree or disagree with this following statement?the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide .
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Taking trip is considered as one of the most delightful activities that people do, it is also strongly recommended by psychologist as way of taking away from depression and increasing longevity as result ,each individual desire to turn traveling into a better and more beneficial experience , personally i tend to be with a group wherease other may hold opposite view .in the following paragraphs i will advocate my view for.
some reason .
First ,however i admit that sometimes people are required to be alone and take a time to think over life's problem and find a way to recover theirselves ,but journey accompanied others is more helpfull .it boosts persons' social character i mean makes persons apportunity to learn how spend happy times with others ,broaden their own horizon and finally make new freinds.
Some of group's members have more tallent to cheer others ,ones who crack funny jokes motivates other members to be more dynamic ,Therefore persons who are ashamed of talking in group be more confident little by little. In addition ,when members gather toghether ,they discuss various affairs and exchange views and information ,that lead to extending thaughts and enhancing their capacity to accept each other without respect to race or religious beliefs.also persons who treat kindly absord others and most of members desire to keep in touch with them after the end of trip .
Second,traveling on tour is more arranged, tours usually create a schedule beforehand and appointe a person who is called tour leader to guide groups based on that .tour leader also is quietly familiar with natural or historical attraction of different places ,as result group's member wont miss visiting any of them. As it was mentioned , tours plan for every motion in advance even the time of eating meals so participants will have minimum wasted time .
Finally i put in proposal ,if persons want to be more open minded it would be more suitable to experience meeting new people,in this order traveling on tour could be a good occasion .in addition it's going to have less consumed time and money in comparision of going trip randomely with family or lonely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, whereas, i mean, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71581805625 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649859943978 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.1344086022 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.366793274 48.9658058833 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.714285714 100.406767564 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 20.6045352989 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 5.45110844103 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 58.0 5.5376344086 1047% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129054330099 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634024191505 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450896911704 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718343432228 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415941055238 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 11.7677419355 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 58.1214874552 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.1575268817 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.01818996416 133% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.0537634409 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.