Do you agree or disagree with this following statement,the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reason and example to support your answer

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...st delightful activities that people do,  it is also strongly recommended by psych...
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...from depression and increasing longevity  as result ,each individual desire to tur...
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...sion and increasing longevity  as result ,each individual desire to turn traveling...
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...dividual desire to turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience ...
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... desire to turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience , person...
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... turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience , personally i ten...
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... better  and more  beneficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group w...
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...ore  beneficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group wherease other...
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...ficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group wherease other may hold ...
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...up wherease other may hold opposite view .in the following paragraphs i will advoc...
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...osite view .in the following paragraphs i will advocate my view for.  some reaso...
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...will advocate my view for.  some reason . When a professional one accomany tripp...
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...hen a professional one accomany trippers , traveling will be a mre instructive ex...
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...sional one accomany trippers , traveling will be a mre instructive experience. M...
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... will be a mre instructive experience. Most of people are just pursuing pleasuring from their...
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...e a mre instructive experience. Most of people are just pursuing pleasuring from...
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...just pursuing pleasuring from their trip ,they observ tourisms attractions ,wherea...
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...r trip ,they observ tourisms attractions ,wherease almost   know nothing about th...
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...ey observ tourisms attractions ,wherease almost   know nothing about their histor...
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...v tourisms attractions ,wherease almost   know nothing about their historical back...
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...nothing about their historical backgroud ,but tour leaders usually have broad inf...
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...othing about their historical backgroud ,but tour leaders usually have broad info...
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...ers usually have broad information about such affairs buildings  architecture , ...
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...ve broad information about such affairs buildings  architecture , people who use...
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...formation about such affairs buildings  architecture , people who used to live t...
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...t such affairs buildings  architecture , people who used to live there snd so o...
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...itecture , people who used to live there snd so on , tour guides knowledge is not...
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...people who used to live there snd so on , tour guides knowledge is not limited to...
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...uides knowledge is not limited to places ,they also are familiar with customs and...
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...edge is not limited to places ,they also are familiar with customs and rituals be...
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...roducing them traveler no only recognize them but also will be able to communicat...
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... be able to communicate with inhabitants  .for example we have so much annual reli...
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...be able to communicate with inhabitants  .for example we have so much annual relig...
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...ry and when tourists participate in them ,feel getting close to nattives . Second...
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... in them ,feel getting close to nattives . Second,traveling on tour is more arran...
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...feel getting close to nattives . Second,traveling on tour is more arranged, tourss guider...
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...e arranged, tourss guider usually create  a schedule beforehand and decide based o...
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...dule beforehand and decide based on that .tour leader s acquaintance about a cert...
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...eforehand and decide based on that .tour leader s acquaintance about a certain pl...
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...der s acquaintance about a certain place lead to groups members attraction even...
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...uaintance about a certain place lead to groups members attraction even ones whi...
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...intance about a certain place lead to groups members attraction even ones which are...
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...a certain place lead to groups members attraction even ones which are not famou...
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...ttraction even ones which are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners m...
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...ich are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners manage time in the most...
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...h are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners manage time in the most a...
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...me in the most appropriate possible form , even the time of eating meals is pr...
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...e in the most appropriate possible form , even the time of eating meals is pre...
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...le form , even the time of eating meals is preordained .so passengers will hav...
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...rm , even the time of eating meals is preordained .so passengers will have mi...
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...e time of eating meals is preordained .so passengers will have minimum wasted ...
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...g meals is preordained .so passengers will have minimum wasted time and maximu...
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...me and maximum efficiency from traveling .personally every time i intend to go on ...
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...y from traveling .personally every time i intend to go on trip for just one day ...
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... i intend to go on trip for just one day ,doubtlessly i will choose a group guidi...
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...i intend to go on trip for just one day ,doubtlessly i will choose a group guidin...
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... on trip for just one day ,doubtlessly i will choose a group guiding by aleader ...
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...i will choose a group guiding by aleader ,in order to dont miss visiting anywhere....
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...a group guiding by aleader ,in order to dont miss visiting anywhere. Third tour le...
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...r to dont miss visiting anywhere. Third tour leadering could be a source of inco...
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...ur leadering could be a source of income for both country and guiders .Appointing...
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... of income for both country and guiders .Appointing tour leaders in historical bu...
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...f income for both country and guiders .Appointing tour leaders in historical buildings ...
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...ing tour leaders in historical buildings is somehow creating a jobs position and...
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...our leaders in historical buildings is somehow creating a jobs position and tou...
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...ical buildings is somehow creating a jobs position and tourism foundation pay the...
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...n and tourism foundation pay them salary .also if a country purposes to make mon...
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...tourism foundation pay them salary .also if a country purposes to make money from...
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...money from tourism and transforms it to a industry it would be better to employe...
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... tourism and transforms it to a industry it would be better to employe some exper...
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...gh to introduce the countrys attractions ,and encourage people to opt their countr...
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...their travels destination. Consequently ,i put in proposal that both people and g...
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...eir travels destination. Consequently ,i put in proposal that both people and go...
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...overnments have to pay more attention to getting help from tour leader, specially...
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...p from tour leader, specially government should persuade students to follow this...
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...our leader, specially government should persuade students to follow this job aca...
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...e students to follow this job academicly .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, second, so, third, whereas, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1373.03311258 155% => OK
No of words: 399.0 270.72406181 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32581453634 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96845078678 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 145.348785872 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 419.366225166 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 21.2450331126 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.71825633 49.2860985944 419% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.571428571 110.228320801 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 21.698381199 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06452816374 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 77.0 4.19205298013 1837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131645113916 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653793484183 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212062328781 0.0662205650399 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589179826067 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219951847412 0.0443174109184 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.3589403974 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 53.8541721854 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.0289183223 242% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.42419426049 133% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 63.6247240618 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.7273730684 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.498013245 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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