Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, it is becoming more and more important for individuals to have a job that better fit their characteristics since they want to have a more comfortable life. Some people believe that working three days a week for long hours is better. Others, however, have an idea that spreading working hours during the week is better. In my opinion, performing more working hours in fewer days is better for the following reasons.
To begin with, this method is more comfortable. In other words, I can have more focus on my job and do more tasks. For instance, last summer I admitted working in a gas company as a summer job. During those days I was asked to complete a project in three months. Later, I spoke to the manager of the company and ask him to increase my working hours. In return, he admitted to gave me the whole wage, if I complete the project sooner than expected. This plan helps me to have more focus on my job and waste less time on the way home (I waste one hour a day on the way). Finally, this strategy helps me to accomplish the project one month sooner. Therefore, I spent the whole month on a vacation with my friend and make that a great memory.
Secondly, I can earn more money. I mean I can manage another job after finishing my work. For instance, when I have a job with more working hour and fewer woking days I will have more spare time and I can manage the time for doing a part time job. As an illustration, I can take some web design projects and do all of this project in the home. Besides that having a second job has another benefit. When I lose my first job or I feel I do not like the career I can change it without no hesitation.
In sum, I believe having a job with more working hour and less working days is better, because of the reasons I mentioned. However, I have the idea that people should not oblige to work in a specific time instead they should be asked to work on a project. In fact, the more project they perform the more money they will earn. This strategy is good for both employee and employer.
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- Official letter 11
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Essay evaluation report
a job that better fit
a job that is better fit
a job that better fits
on a vacation with my friend and make that a great memory.
on a vacation with my friends and make a great memory.
I can change it without no hesitation.
I can change it without hesitation.
Sentence: For instance, when I have a job with more working hour and fewer woking days I will have more spare time and I can manage the time for doing a part time job.
Error: woking Suggestion: working
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flaws:
1. two reasons are somehow similar, both are 'making money'
2. words are repeated, like: '... is better...'
3. Try not to use pronouns like 'you, I, they...' as the subject of a sentence.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 388 350
No. of Characters: 1611 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.438 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.152 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.24 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.87 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.974 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.652 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.353 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.504 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e and I can manage the time for doing a part time job. As an illustration, I can take som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i mean, in fact, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2912371134 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3532762657 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451030927835 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1389923902 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3913043478 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358296634902 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1136871878 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889255608223 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249114000795 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537257930999 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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