The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates about how many times the three computer packages are downloaded from the internet over 5 weeks.
Overall, it can be seen that the ActiveX is the most popular package, whereas the Net is the least popular package.
In detail, both ActiveX and Net exhibit similar patterns. In week 1, ActiveX begins at around 76,000, twice as many as the Net with 38,000. While there is a sharp swell to approximately 110,000 for ActiveX in third week, Net witnesses a gradual dip to about 7,000 in the same week. Obviously, the amount (7000) is the lowest total of the given term regarding the Net. Despite dropping, Net sees a rapid rise to roughly around 45,000 in the final week. Having risen in the previous 3 weeks, ActiveX, however, experiences a swift decline in the week 4 followed by an abrupt soar to just over 120,000 in week 5, the peak amount of the whole week.
In contrast, Java follows an opposite trend. It stands at 42,000 in the first week and then sees a gradual climb week on week to finish at 82,000 in the end of the week, making it (82,000) two times higher than the amount (42,000) in week 1.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 205 200
No. of Characters: 889 1000
No. of Different Words: 120 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.784 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.337 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.213 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 59 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.23 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.399 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.623 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igher than the amount 42,000 in week 1.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, then, third, well, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51219512195 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28548949349 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8360522565 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151832118681 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671064618463 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109978410044 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134236207868 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145091143798 0.0819641961636 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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