Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
In the present age, I firmly believe< choice of clothes play an important role on prestige of people and the way that others understand their character. Some people assert the style of people clothe is the most convenient and easiest way to realize their culture and personality. I am, to a huge extent, disagree with this idea.
Granted, clothing is a subject which is inspired by globalization. These days a variety of brands of clothe which has store all over the world have sparked heated changes among people, especially teenagers and make a situation which all people follow the same fashion style. For instance, in the metropolises you can see lot of teenagers wear Nike sneakers or Adidas T-shirt, thus it is difficult to understand this is their own choice or it is just a popular style which everyone follow it.
Furthermore, the most important issue that people suffer it is a poverty. It lead to people can not go through the way that they like even wear the clothes which match with their character. For example when you have enough budget, it is easy purchase everything that you need base on your interest and favorite. Thus, I contend that it is not appropriate scale in order to advice peoples' behavior base on their appearance.
I would therefore argue that although the first factor which attract us is their appearance, However, it should not influenced on our decision about their personality, since, financial obstacles and combination of culture affect on the way that we wear clothes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
... that people suffer it is a poverty. It lead to people can not go through the way th...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'influence'
Suggestion: influence
...heir appearance, However, it should not influenced on our decision about their personality...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...al obstacles and combination of culture affect on the way that we wear clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9296875 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66376464611 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.227513993 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196906743415 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717862494824 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454576572364 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119679572813 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378367412611 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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