blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years.As society develops it is increasingly seen as an unvivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed.All blood sports should be banned.Discuss the main arguments for this point and give your opinion
Killing animals for sports are popular in modern society and it become a debatable topic today, because blood sports involve killing of animals which is considered as unethical human activity and violation of animal rights.In my opinion all blood sports like bullfighting , cockfighting, hunting should be banned as soon as possible by making stringent laws and punishments.
First of all, in ancient times blood sports are a part of our culture and conducting these activities during festival times. For example , bullfighting are common in some communities and people are likely to participate in such games to show their courage and make a feel of excitement among public, but in my point of view , it couldnt be considered as a normal sport because animals involving in these adventorous games are being injured or even killed.So blood sports should be banned.
Secondly using animal as a tool for entertaintment and gaining money from it is considered as an uncivilized activity and it violates animal protection act, because most of these animals are vulnerable.For instance , in case of bullfighting and cockfighting , animals get injured and finally died because of the poor negligence from the human side.Inorder to stop this cruelty towards animals , goverment should make strong laws for animal protection and give hard punishment to the rule violators.
To conclude blood sports should banned by laws and punishments because animals are also the part of the environment and they also have the right to live as same as humanbeings, so it is our respinsibility to make the world more eco- friendly and keep all creatures safe.
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also, but, finally, first, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23574144487 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94718882574 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.563370455 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 275.4 106.682146367 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6 7.06120827912 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336516560758 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183323206042 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073630332795 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20611056051 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759549674013 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.24 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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