AT PRESENT TIME THE POPULATION OF SOME COUNTRIES INCLUDES A RELATIVELY LARGER NUMBER OF YOUNG ADULTS, COMPARE WITH NUMBER OF OLDER PEOPLE. DO THE ADVANTAGES OF THIS SITUATION OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES
Each and every member of the society contributes to the development of his country. There are some states where the number of older persons are comparatively more than the younger people for instance Japan. Whereas in some republic such as in Pakistan and India younger generation is on greater side.heaving a larger proportion of youth is considered to have more advantages for a country as compared to the older generation.
Youngsters have always been the great assets of nations. To being with, they are the most energetic people of any society. A younger generation comes up with new ideas and brilliant motivation to work in any situation. They are the best contributors to the society, who actively take part in the progression of there countries. Children are our future and older people have already contributed to the society. Younger generation works regardless of the superstitious ideas and old beliefs of their ancestors, however, older generation’s contributions can not be denied.
Older people of the societies are the one who has already contributed towards the development of their nations. There vast experience and historical knowledge played a vital role in decision making. The tax they paid throughout there lives has subsidized towards the growth of there countries.
In conclusion, older people should not be considered as a burden to the society, however, younger generations are more actively participating in the progression of states. That is why it is more beneficial to have active members of the society than to have dependent older people.
- AT PRESENT TIME THE POPULATION OF SOME COUNTRIES INCLUDES A RELATIVELY LARGER NUMBER OF YOUNG ADULTS, COMPARE WITH NUMBER OF OLDER PEOPLE. DO THE ADVANTAGES OF THIS SITUATION OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES 61
- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the Internet Discuss both views and give your own opi 67
- Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 84
- Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case?Is this a good thing or a bad thing?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y as compared to the older generation. Youngsters have always been the great as...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
...ys been the great assets of nations. To being with, they are the most energetic peopl...
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Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Older) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...contributions can not be denied. Older people of the societies are the one who has al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05488551714 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0841606389 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11714973381 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387356970329 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490171528815 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730190290652 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615964838068 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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