The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables compare the amount of sales of Fairtrade in types of different products ( labelled coffee and bananas) in five different areas of European between 1999 and 2004.
In general terms, the amount of sales for both products ( coffee and bananas) was increase sales in five European countries in 1999 and 2004, exception the amount of sales bananas in Denmark and Sweden.
The first table shows that the largest coffee sale was in Switzerland ( 3 million euros) in 1999 but after five year, the highest sale was in the UK ( 20 million euros) that was more than three times in the amount of coffee sale in Switzerland ( 6 million euros ) in 2004. The sales amounts in Denmark, Belgium, Sweden were 1.8 , 1 , 0.8 million euros respectively in 1999 and these amounts rose 2 , 1.7 , 1 million euros in after five years.
The second table shows that, Switzerland was the largest bananas sales and the amounts sale increased from 15 million euros to reached 47 million euros from 1999 to 2004. The amount of bananas sale in Switzerland was more then eight times in the UK ( 5.5 million euros) in 2004 that was the second higer amount of bananas sales in five European countries. In contrast, the amount of bananas sale decreased in Sweden and Denmark between 1999 and 2004.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, then, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72146118721 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3188236309 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.383561643836 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0757097555 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.714285714 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343586799788 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226241967784 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973003313878 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28809834296 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871742490993 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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