Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
Over the past few decades, the overseas tours have been promoting due to certain reasons across the globe. Some people are of the opinion that this encouragement in the tourism sector has an adverse impact on a host country and they argue that it needs to be discouraged for many reasons. From my perspective, by knowing the cause for this negative behaviour of people towards this trend, we can
take necessary steps to ameliorate the situation.
The opponents assert that such growing trend is bad for their culture. This is because travelers often do not know and learn the visiting country's rituals and customs before planning their trips thus they might disrespect and hurts sentiments of the local crowd associated with their culture and religion. For instance, some parts of the world such as India and Pakistan have stringent religious rules if someone failed to follow then it could lead to a legal tussle between natives and tourists, according to the sources, causing disturb the peace and cultural harmony of a nation.
Another reason is the environmental hazards that come with this tourism sector. It is irrefutable that visitors cause waste production in form of litter and harmful substance, which can be seriously threatened by too many travellers. It is evident that many a times visitors do not follow the norms set by the national authorities and tourist industries to keep the environment clean and green, polluting the historical buildings, monuments and natural flora and fauna. Therefore, such contaminated places might not attract more tourists, impacting the local community economically.
Even though the opponents have valid points in their support, however, governments and tourism management need to take some crucial measures to bring changes in the attitude of such group of folks. Higher agencies need to create awareness among local people about the benefits of international tourism by generating multiple job opportunities in this sector, thereby, improving the financial status of natives. Also, the government should work out on the waste management policies by involving citizens and tourist’s authorities to keep the tourist's attraction clean and green, leading to attract more visitors to such places.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that international tourism may create some adverse effects due to lack of cultural awareness and absence of strict rules in the tourism sector, nonetheless, we can reap several benefits from this development. On balance, I am convinced that both the government and tourism industry could change the perspectives of native people by taking adequate measures thus improve the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 547, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
... tourist's authorities to keep the tourists attraction clean and green, leading to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2264.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39047619048 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82616540287 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8590356662 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.933333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304306959684 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955135488006 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721196268602 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137343449816 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880383044622 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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