The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods
The table provide data about the amount of people visiting to Ashdown Museum and the pie charts give information about the result of person asked about satisfiel when they were visited during period before and after the Museum was refurbished.
Overall, the figure of people visiting the Ash Museum and the proportion of people who answer feedbank satisfiel when their visit increased after museum was refurbished.
It is clear that, during the year before Museum was refurbished, person accounted for the lowest with only about 74,000 of the total of visitors. However, the during period after it was refurbished there was an increase in the number of people visiting to museum up to 92,000.
In contrast, the year before refurbishment, the proportion od people who answer that very satisfied and satisfied approximately 15 and 30 respectively. Meanwhile when museum became moderm, the percentage of person increased feel very satisfied and satisfied by 30 and 40 respectively. However, the figure for people who have feedback was dissatisfied and very dissatisfied decreased significant by 25 and 5 to 15 and 5 respectively. In additionally, the number of people who have no response remained stable at 5.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25257731959 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96050902173 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489690721649 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0419490149 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310688313299 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138952799955 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100205722789 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211921743239 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954148528767 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.