Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Tourism and information technology are boon companion nowadays, because promotion if popular tourist places on e-media is burgeoning in different ways. However, some people firmly adhere to visit the actual landscape to get contemplative beliefs about the place. We have lightning speed of communication today which facilitate us real-time images of alluring destination worldwide, that’s why there is a debate as to whether we should visit the country, or explore it on electronic source of information. I intend to discuss both views followed by my opinion.
On one side of the coin, travelling abroad is expensive than earlier so, it is not worthy to everyone’s pocket while internet and television are blessings for those who cannot afford such international tours. Along this, they can know about history and ancient monuments while sitting at home without any extra burden. Moreover, user interfaces of cellphones, computers and televisions are so fascinating that it can give real experience of actual views of location. For instance, 360 degree view and street view options of google maps website which depicts high definition pictures around popular places.
On the other side, a vacation of a week to abroad can rejuvenate you for months. Let’s take travelling to a nation under consideration. Firstly, we cannot know and enjoy a country only by surfing on internet indeed we need to roam around different cities, try local food and interact with native people can leave deep imprint of a country in our mind, along this patronage we get from indigenous people is most wonderful experience.
Secondly, natural asset of a country like mountains, forests, lakes of a country ever entice travelers to visit that nation. Moreover, certain regions of country have unique environment than others, these attracts more tourist, and thus whole economy of that region is depending on tourism industry. To cite an example, south western state of India, Goa is popular among tourist only for multifarious beaches and warm weather.
To conclude with my opinion, not only because I am fond of travelling but also eager to know about geography of different cities I prefer to take a trip than a couch.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...wide, that's why there is a debate as to whether we should visit the country, or explore...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
..., and thus whole economy of that region is depending on tourism industry. To cite an example...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27042253521 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85364208689 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656338028169 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3948238085 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.733333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185053207695 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575623314032 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383177528859 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893871880819 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416634249797 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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