The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

The diagram illustrates the steps how electricity is produced by geothermal energy
From an overall perspective, the diagram can be outlined by five stages, beginning with codl water and culminating in electricity in town.
The process commences when cold water is plumped down beneath the ground with depth of 4.5km below. Following this, when necessary quality of cold water is enough, the are gone to injection well, where the water is passed though hot rocks as know geothermal zone. After this stage is complete, that cold water becomes hot water an the gone to the production well, where heated water is pumped up.
Subsequently, the hot water is pumped up to condencer with aim of the hot water is transformed into steam. Eventualy, the steam is transported to turbine, after that, it is able to generate power the final stage is that the produced ectricity for the purpose of electricity is sent to the town

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...essary quality of cold water is enough, the are gone to injection well, where the water...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...lete, that cold water becomes hot water an the gone to the production well, where ...
^^
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
...lete, that cold water becomes hot water an the gone to the production well, where heat...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rpose of electricity is sent to the town
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94193548387 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67260351967 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7784827918 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171192491217 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860595434186 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118762939504 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183975373602 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212613877723 0.0819641961636 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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