Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree?
The influence of technological innovation was debatable, which now has become more controversial. The substantial influence of technological advancement has sparked the controversy over the potential trend on individual's life in recent years. It can be agreed that technology based devices have negative impact, however, some people claimed that it is a blessing to our society. This essay will elaborate how technology has made people life more convenient and how it has made people more machine dependent and will lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reason how technological development has made our life more easier, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that the recently developed machines are highly automated and less time consuming which makes people's life more labor-saving. For example, washing machine, the cloth washing machine, is highly automated these days, people do not have to physically active to wash their cloth as they just need to put their dirty cloth in the machine, put some detergent and input desirable time, then wait until the cloth being washed. Technological innovations, therefore, plays a crucial role in human's daily life.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tends to believe that technology driven machines have made us a machine dependent because people, nowadays, entirely depend upon the machine even to carry out small task which
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...controversy over the potential trend on individuals life in recent years. It can be agreed ...
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...nological development has made our life more easier, but the most conspicuous one lies in t...
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Line 2, column 542, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd input desirable time, then wait until the cloth being washed. Technological in...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hine dependent because people, nowadays, entirely depend upon the machine even to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39013452915 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86474442886 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632286995516 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.3361242936 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.25 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151306864439 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073506688179 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498825649604 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988005328281 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450471975971 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 53.1260098522 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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